Tears of water, tears of rain
This is a cool poem I wrote in Writing 12 today
I thought it was good
Tears of Water, Tears of Rain
Like the tears of a woman
Who has lost the one her heart desired
So rain does fall
Flowing into mountain streams
They stream from her eyes
Enwrapping her cheekbones in a blanket of salty water
So the water flows down the mountain side
Encircling trees and enveloping stones
The tears flow down
Creating patterns of loss on her face
So water flows down the mountain side
Writing the song of spring on the earth
So the tears fall into puddles
That tell of her devotion to her love
So does the mountain spring bring life
As it's devotion to the Creator of all life

Tears of Sorrow, Tears of Pain
Tears of Water, Tears of Rain
Lots of love!
Samantha
I thought it was good
Tears of Water, Tears of Rain
Like the tears of a woman
Who has lost the one her heart desired
So rain does fall
Flowing into mountain streams
They stream from her eyes
Enwrapping her cheekbones in a blanket of salty water
So the water flows down the mountain side
Encircling trees and enveloping stones
The tears flow down
Creating patterns of loss on her face
So water flows down the mountain side
Writing the song of spring on the earth
So the tears fall into puddles
That tell of her devotion to her love
So does the mountain spring bring life
As it's devotion to the Creator of all life

Tears of Sorrow, Tears of Pain
Tears of Water, Tears of Rain
Lots of love!
Samantha
4 Comments:
Thanks Nicky!
*smile*
You're the best!
you're both wrong...I'M THE BEST!!! ha, ha, hee, hee, ho, ho, ahem.
i'm sure that i'm at least as cool if not more cool than all of you put together. bam zinger.
ouch!
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